Here is the second draft based on feedback from corp mates and people in the community who saw the first one. A big thanks for the feedback too.
Its not exactly where I want it to be: my footage library is still small and heavily leaning towards BMTHOKK and some cap fleets I was in for structure bashing (not exactly riveting), and I'm still getting the hang of editing and transitions. But it felt cleaner and I can see that once I get some small fleet footage and some more scenic shots it will get better. Also, bonus: no PvE combat footage :)
The director in charge of recruiting is pleased with it and wants it to go to wider distribution.
Enjoy!
(NOTE on music: Its more of the typical Eve heavy rock / numetal but the guys like it and it has spunk. )
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Better :) It's still a bit long relative the to available footage, but that probably can't be helped at the moment. The music has dynamic in both melody and volume, which is good.
ReplyDeleteI would have done the ending a bit differently: Transition to the m3-landscape, over that fade in (don't scroll) the Credits, fade to the channel contact information; and only then fade out the m3 landscape, leaving the contact text as the last thing in the video.